October 18, 2025

A Critique To Wole Soyinka 's Death And the King 's horseman : Empty Shrine


Chapter 15: The Echoes of Oba's Promise
The years that followed Tola's departure and Dayo's retreat into the digital world proved that the old guard had not entirely vanished. Thompson, though disgraced and ruined, had served as a cautionary tale for a new class of ruthless entrepreneurs. The old gods, having been fed their sacrifice, seemed to have retreated, but the lure of power and the temptation to bend the rules for profit remained.
Oba Holdings, despite its ethical makeover, faced relentless challenges. The market, unforgiving of missteps, put pressure on its transparent business model. Investors, accustomed to opaque, high-risk, high-reward ventures, saw Oba’s principled approach as a sign of weakness. There were whispers of potential hostile takeovers by larger, less scrupulous corporations. The shadow of Femi's death, though distant, still loomed.
Dayo, from his secure digital fortress, monitored these threats. The "Oba's Promise" registry was a powerful tool, but it was a shield, not a sword. He could protect against corporate fraud, but he couldn't stop the broader forces of a capitalist system that still rewarded the cutthroat. He had learned that technology could expose the truth, but it couldn't change human nature.
Tola, from her new platform on the global stage, served as Oba's public conscience. She used her influence to advocate for regulations that would protect companies like Oba, arguing that a transparent, ethical market was a more stable and prosperous one in the long run. Her greatest challenge was convincing an impatient world that the slow, deliberate work of building trust was more valuable than the quick, deceptive path to riches.
One day, Tola received a call from Kunle. The former marketing man, having paid his penance in obscurity, had re-emerged, not as a corporate shill, but as a journalist investigating financial malfeasance. His voice, once slick and self-assured, now carried the weary gravity of a man who had seen the abyss.
"They're circling, Tola," Kunle said. "A new firm, even more aggressive than Thompson's. They’re using the same playbook. Creating false narratives, spreading misinformation to tank the stock."
Tola thanked him for the warning. She knew this was the ultimate test. Femi’s death had exposed a flaw in the old system. Their work had exposed the rot, but had they created a new system strong enough to withstand the rot's return?
Chapter 16: The New Horseman
Tola called Dayo. The two, once bound by tragedy, were now united by purpose. Dayo had been anticipating this. He had built a system, not just for Oba, but for any company that wanted to be transparent. It was a network, a community of ethics.
"We don't fight fire with fire, Tola," Dayo said. "We fight it with light."
He activated a feature in the "Oba's Promise" network. It was a digital "Not-I bird," a beacon of truth. When the new corporate raiders launched their attack, spreading rumors and lies about Oba’s financial health, the "Not-I bird" system would instantly flag the false claims and provide counter-evidence from Oba’s transparent records. The information was irrefutable, undeniable, and broadcast to every investor and news agency on the network.
The attack, which would have crippled a traditional company, was met with a flood of unassailable truth. The market, which once rewarded deception, was now conditioned to reward transparency. The raiders' scheme collapsed. Their reputation was destroyed, their finances in ruins.
The victory was not celebrated in a boardroom or with champagne. It was a quiet triumph of a new kind of ritual, one built on code and collective conscience, not blood and sacrifice. Tola and Dayo had finally proven that the ancient cosmic order was not bound to death, but to the truth.
In the end, Femi's tragic, misplaced sacrifice had paved the way for a rebirth he could never have imagined. His ghost, and Oba’s, no longer haunted Oba Holdings. They were the company’s genesis, the painful birth pangs of a new, more just way of doing business. The real horseman had fallen, but from his grave, a new kind of legacy had ridden into the future, carried not by a single man, but by the will of a community and the power of an unassailable truth
Chapter 17: The Weight of the Ring
Years had passed since the new firm's hostile takeover attempt, and Oba had not only survived but thrived. The company, a beacon of transparency and ethical capitalism, was a testament to the new order. Dayo, no longer just the silent architect, had taken a more public role as the chairman of the Oba Foundation, a nonprofit dedicated to promoting corporate ethics and digital transparency across Nigeria.
His work was a quiet revolution, a subtle yet powerful reshaping of the business landscape. He was building on Oba's original vision, not just protecting its physical assets, but preserving its philosophical core. He was the king's heir, not by birthright, but by moral purpose.
One evening, Dayo found himself at the grave of his father. He stood in the quiet cemetery, the Lagos evening a symphony of distant sounds. He took the wooden not-I bird from his pocket. It had been years since he had last held it. He now saw it not as a burden or a symbol of tragedy, but as a compass. It had guided him towards truth, toward accountability, and toward a future where the old rituals held no sway.
He also had the signet ring, the ring that Oba had given Femi, the ring that Femi had coveted, the ring that represented the power he could not possess. Dayo had kept it, not out of greed, but as a reminder of his father's final, devastating error.
He stood there for a long time, the weight of the ring and the bird in his hands. He thought of his father, the man he had once admired, then pitied, and now, finally, understood. Femi's ambition had blinded him, his fear of irrelevance had made him mistake a final act of respect for an eternal power. He had chosen death over a future where his authority was diminished.
Dayo, in contrast, had embraced a future of shared power and transparency. He had found a way to honor his father's legacy, not by repeating his mistakes, but by correcting them. He had made Oba a company that would not require the sacrifice of its leaders, but would thrive on the collective will of its people.
He looked at the not-I bird one last time, a symbol of self-sacrifice. He placed it back in his pocket. The ring, however, he held in his hand, a tangible reminder of the corrupting power of unchecked ambition.
Chapter 18: A New Kind of Oracle
Dayo walked away from the grave, toward his old friend Kunle. The former marketing man, now a respected journalist, had built a new life for himself. He had started a digital publication dedicated to investigative journalism, and he had been instrumental in exposing the new firm’s hostile takeover plot. He was a new kind of praise-singer, one who celebrated not the power of men, but the power of truth.
"They're gone, you know," Kunle said, referring to the new firm. "They underestimated the system you built."
"It wasn't me, Kunle," Dayo said. "It was all of us. Tola. You. The employees. We all played our part."
"The oracle spoke through technology," Kunle mused. "That's a new one. The old gods must be confused."
Dayo smiled. "The old gods never cared about technology. They cared about truth. They cared about promises. My father failed his promise, and he paid the price. We kept ours, and we prospered."
Dayo took the signet ring from his pocket and placed it on the table between them. "I've been carrying this for too long," he said. "It's a symbol of a past we can't forget, but it's not a future we should carry."
Kunle looked at the ring, the symbol of Oba's power, and his mind went back to the old days, the grandeur, the praise-singing, the illusion of eternal power. But that power had been a trap, a gilded cage.
"What do you do with it?" Kunle asked.
"We destroy it," Dayo said. "Not in a ritual, but in a symbol."

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